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September 23, 2011


Writing Task 2 (an essay)

Many students take a year off in order to work before they go to college or university. Do you think this has more advantages than disadvantages?


In our present age, in order to succeed in this competitive world, knowledge from school does not suffice, therefore in my opinion, students who continue studying from the school to university get less benefits compared to students who go to travel before going to university.

Firstly, students that continues studying from school to university will only gain theory. Of course, theory is very necessary, but you can't do everything based on theory itself. Experience and theory is needed in the working field. Even so, after graduating, graduates can't accomplish their work properly because the lack of experience in working.

This is where working before going to university benefits. People gain skills and experience, be more familiar with the job they're working. They produce a better quality of output compared to those lack of experience in work. It saves the time and money in training those people going to university without working. Besides, their education is the same as or even higher than those going to university without working.

I summary, i think student should go to travel or getting a job before going to universities. Therefore, they will not only gain basic knowledge, but also experience and skills which are useful for them to get a good job in the future.


Children will understand the concept of money, estimating the risk of spending money on something they will buy in the future.



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September 22, 2011

In some countries children have very strict rules of behavior, in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. To what extent should children have to follow rules?


It is a complex issue for children to follow rules, since they grow up in different cultures. In India, children are considered to be obedient and submissive to their parents. However, this is not the case for Western countries where children follow the motto" I shall do what i want". In this case, i believe following strict rules has its positive and negative setbacks.


Firstly, strict rules of behavior turn children into more responsible and respectful. This forms a stable society where it is free from vices such as prostitution and drug abuse. Secondly, if children do not follow strict rules, they will get out of hand and do whatever they want.


However, forcing children to follow strict rules doesn't always have it's positive results as mentioned above. Teenagers are more likely to do the opposite of what they're told to do. Children should be given more rights to develop their own patterns of behaviors.


In summary, it is clear that children should be guided by rules, however, these rules should not be imposed on them because they have the room to develop their own traits of character and adopt to a behavioral pattern of their own.



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10:12 PM.



You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.


Dear Sir/Madam,

This letter is to inform you that i won't be able to start work on the 15th of November.

The reason that i can't start working is because my mother fell from the stairs and broke her leg yesterday. The doctor says that it will take 2 weeks for her leg to heal and walk again, therefore i have to take care of her during this period. I'm very sorry to cause you this trouble. As the only child in the family, i have no choice but to look after her. I apologize for not being able to turn up on that day.

I am able to work for home and will complete the project as mentioned. I will report to you through email, and if there's a problem, i will inform you along the way.

Once again, I apologize for the inconvenience and thank you for your understanding.


Yours faithfully,

Mariadi




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10:08 PM.



You migrated to another country. Write a letter to your friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you chose this country.

Dear Margarett,

How are you doing? I'm sorry for replying now. I was sick for the whole week. I am writing to inform to you that i have migrated to Sydney, Australia.

I migrated to Sydney because i have been accepted by the university here. 2 months ago, i applied for the university of Wollonggong. A week later, i received a letter from the university of Wollonggong, informing that i was accepted to their university. I was over the moon.

I have just settled things here. There is a swimming pool at the 3rd floor on the apartment where i'm living at. I swim almost everyday now. I have made quite a lot of friends here. The people here are very friendly and helpful.

Do let me know when you plan to visit Sydney. You are always welcome to stay over at my new apartment.

Regards,

Mariadi



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10:00 PM.


September 21, 2011

Write a letter to a bus company saying you have left something valuable on the bus and tell them what to do if they find it.


Dear Sir/Madam,


I am writing this letter to report to you about the briefcase i left behind in your bus.

I was taking bus 201, at 11.45 AM, today. The moment i left the bus, i realized

that my briefcase is gone. I am pretty sure that i left it in the bus. Please help me check if my briefcase is still inside.


My briefcase is a a soft leather one, brown colored with 2 buckles at the front. The buckles are gold-plated. There's a scratch at the bottom in the left-hand corner of the bag. The brand name is at the top right hand corner, written GUCCI on it.

I have all of my college papers inside the briefcase, and also a novel that i was planning to read after i got home.


Please contact me once you find the briefcase. This is my number, +625988988, or you can contact me through email, and this is my email address, aldrickjy@hotmail.com.

Thank you.


Yours truly,

Aldrick



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8:50 AM.



Even though globalization affects the world’s economies in a positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. Discuss.



In the present age, globalization have played a big part in influencing our lives. Some people argue that globalization have influence and benefit our lives, while some argues the detrimental effect of globalization as well.


Globalization does not only play a big part in the development of technology and economy, but also promoting the cultural exchange between other countries.

Firstly, people can get to know each other from other countries. People can set

up multinational companies in other places, making a contribution to the local technology and employment. On the other hand, people can watch movies performed by other countries, such as Kungfu Panda and The Mummy.


The effect of globalization can be seen almost everywhere and everyday.

It is very common to see teenagers wearing Nike T-shirts and adidas footwear, listening to western music on Ipods, dancing Hip-hops, eating at KFC. People might learn to follow cultures from other countries, and neglect their own culture. Another negative aspect of globalization is the risk and danger of epidemic disease which easily spread in the society today. One of the evidence is the arise in bird's flu disease which has infected most Asian countries over a short time period.


In summary, I am convinced that we should promote globalization. Although globalization does come with some negative and positive aspects. However, the positive aspects have far outweigh the negative aspects of it.



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1:31 AM.


September 20, 2011


Writing test

Writing task 1 (a letter)

You had a small accident in the kitchen at your rental place. Write to your landlord and say

- How did it happen?
- What are the things that were damaged?
- Suggest what your landlord has to do about it


Dear Mr. Franklin,

I am writing to complain to you about the place i rented from you few days ago.

I came back from work at 8 PM like usual. I went inside my room and change into my clothes. While I was changing my clothes, I suddenly smelt something coming from the kitchen. I went to the kitchen to check it, and was surprised to see the stove wasn't turned off properly, thus causing the gas coming out from it. I immediately turned it off and opened the windows and doors, to let the gas escape.

This is a serious matter. Good thing i noticed that the gas was leaking, or else it would have been a disaster. I am pretty sure that you forgot to turn off the stove properly before going out. Thankfully, nothing was damaged.

I decided to rent this place from you because of the previous good recommendations my friend gave about, however after this experience, i felt horrified.

Please be more careful in the future, i hope this kind of accident will never happen again.


Faithfully yours,

Mariadi



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Writing task 2 (an essay)

Some think that news and media have too much influence on people’s lives. Is it a negative or a positive development?

During the 20th century, newspapers are treated as a rich form of mass communication, as well as today. Today, news can be shared in a second due to the invention of TV, radio, and internet.

The media provides us with daily news. People can get to know of what's happening today in other countries. On the one hand, the media also informs about important events, such as scientist's new invention, Charity shows, environment problems, new technology, so that we are aware of it.

The media plays a big part in influencing people's life, especially children. Children can benefit from watching TV and media. Watching animal channel will enable them to learn about animal specifications and how animals adapt to their habitat.

People can now surf the internet, and get to know more people. Students can do their assignments and obtain information easier. Meanwhile, it is easier for businessman to travel overseas since ticket can be booked through internet. The media makes life much convenient and easier than before.

However, some people might use the internet to surf for porn websites, or play online games. Children might sit in front of TV all day watching it, thus damaging their eyesight.

In my opinion, although the media has both and negative affects, but I believe the mass media has far more positive development compared to the negative development. If one can focus and put the media into a good use, then the media itself can be considered as "flawless."



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“The first car appeared on Britain’s road in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What are your views?”


It is a fact that the population of cars we see today have dramatically increased since the year of 1990's. Problems such as traffic congestion, jammed roads, traffic accidents, pollution in the environment have been increasing. This is mainly because people are able to afford cars with higher living standards, which means that more and more people own cars.

In my opinion, people shouldn't use car too much often. The fact that that a car gives out extremely poisonous gas and pollutes the environment. Another alternative forms of transport may be the usage of bicycle.

Bicycle is environmental friendly. It doesn't emit out hazardous gas. Meanwhile, riding a bicycle doesn't involve accidents and traffics, it is much safer and healthier compared to cars. Not to mention the cost of a car, a bicycle is much cheaper.

Government can increase taxes and the price of cars, or point out new law to limit the number of cars per family/per company. This will reduce the usage of cars in this society.

In conclusion, i think we should be more conscious regarding the usage of cars. In exchange, we can use bicycle, another alternative method of transportation which is way much safer and healthier than car.



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1:20 AM.


September 19, 2011

Writing task 2 topic

Even though developing countries receive financial help, poverty is still an issue. Some say they should be receiving other kind of help, to eliminate poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give examples and suggest what other form of help can be offered.


Throughout all the century, the problem of poverty still hounds mankind. Some developed countries have overcome this issue, however developing countries are still facing this problem despite the fact they received billions of dollars in the form of international aid. It is clear that simply providing monetary assistance will not be enough to deal with the menace of poverty.


The root cause of poverty is not because of the shortage of money, but the lack of knowledge on how to generate wealth. It has been aptly said," Give a man a fish and you feed him for a day. Teach a man to fish and you feed him for a lifetime". Developing countries need to take actions in improving social health, education, and skill development of citizens in poor countries.


Focusing on technologies such agricultural can increase their food production. Moreover, giving them education and knowledge can change their better quality of life. Improving in health care such as building more medical facilities can aid in improving the health of the citizens.


Overall, I agree that developing countries should receive financial aid from developed countries. However, developing countries should use the money they receive to improve their quality of life, such as building more medical facilities, improving in technologies and food production, and give them further education. With this, we are more likely to see reduction in poverty.



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9:49 PM.



You stayed at your friends? house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Task: Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.

Dear Oline,

May i ask how you are doing? I am sorry for replying now, i have been tied up by my assignments these days. Firstly, i would like to express my gratitude for your hospitality and gesture during my visit to your house in Australia.

Another reason why i'm writing to you, is because the fact that i forgot a very important document in the room i used in your house. This document is a signed contract during my participation in the business seminar, and was the very reason of my trip to Australia. You certainly can imagine how desperate I am for these few days looking for this document midst of nowhere. Since i couldn't find it anywhere, i am pretty sure i left it in your house.

Please inform me as soon as you get hold of the document, and post it for express delivery as soon as possible. I will pay for the expense, and please let me know the name of your bank, account, and branch numbers.

Regards,

Aldrick




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8:42 AM.



You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Task: Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodations and cost.


Dear Sir,

I am writing to ask about the information regarding the seminar that you will be conducting next week.

I am working in an electronic company in SriLanka, and i am very keen to take part in this seminar.

I think that it would be a great opportunity for me to get to know about the latest electronics appliances. Meanwhile on the other hand, i can get to know more people working in other electronic companies.

Therefore, I need to get some information based on the seminar that will be conducted next week. Firstly, i need some details regarding the date,time and venue, and the programs that will be conducted. Besides that, i need to get hold on the details concerning accommodations and the total cost you estimated for each person.

Please send the information i requested above to my email address, aldrickjy@yahoo.com. I would like to receive it as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you.


Yours faithfully,

Aldrick



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8:17 AM.


September 18, 2011

Financial education should be a mandatory component of the school program. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In some countries, many young generations are facing difficulties concerning financial problems. In my opinion, I agree that financial education should be treated as a mandatory subject at school.


The common problem for those young people is that they don't know how to manage their monetary problems well. As we can see, the moment an advertisement carry out the message," Only 20 dollars a week, with no deposits."

This is very misleading. Young ones might think that living in a debt is normal.

Mostly, children's money come from their parents. Children might not understand the importance and value of money, thus spending money without even thinking twice. They think that earning money is simple and an easy task, unfortunately, it's the other way around.


A financial education is one of the solution to this problem. Children can learn and understand the concept of using money, estimating the risk of spending money to buy something in the future. They will be able to manage money well, and spend their money wisely. Children will think twice, whether it is wise to purchase the

item before buying it.


However, financial education doesn't always have it's positive results as mentioned above. Financial education involves setting prices and value for certain goods, this can result children turning into cold-hearted beings. Meanwhile, being too egoistic and self-centered might rise when one starts to measure things from a profit-making perspective.


Overall, financial education has it's positive and negative aspects. In my opinion, the advantages are stronger than the disadvantages, therfore i agree that financial education should be treated as a important subject at school. Children will understand the importance of money and spending money in a wise way.




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10:34 PM.



You have bought a new laptop computer and in a few days of purchase discovered a major flaw. Write a letter to the company. In your letter

- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.

Dear sir/madam,


I am one of your customer who recently purchased a laptop from your store.

I am writing this letter to you to inform you about the dissatisfaction i had regarding the laptop.


As soon as i opened my laptop, i realized that the operating system of the laptop is different from what i read in the catalog. In the catalog, it provides windows operating system, but the operating system wasn't installed in the computer i bought. Another thing, i chose a grey color laptop, yet the one i received was a black color laptop. What's worse is, the memory specification is totally different from what's written in the catalog.


i really need this situation to be resolve as soon as possible. I made this decision to buy the laptop from your store because of the previous good recommendations some friends of mine gave about. However, after this experience, i felt disappointed.


I would like you to send me the laptop that i first chose at your store, with the details i filled above in the letter. If i don't get a quick response about this matter, i demand a full refund.


Thank you.

Faithfully yours, Aldrick.




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10:27 PM.


September 15, 2011

The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.


Throughout the history, people had seen and are seeing a lot of changes. In the past, people preferred having a single career in a single profession, however, today, we can see

that many people are having several careers and further education.


It is a fact that society today is too competitive compared to the past. We can see that many people are facing unemployment, or redundancy.


The demand of qualities have increased, people would much prefer several careers than single careers. This is because several careers hold more skills compared to the first one, chances of being employed is higher if one possesses more skills.


Today, children, or even adults in age of thirties, are even studying to improve the better quality of life. Children may take more courses like music, arts, other language courses, so that they'll possess more skills and have higher chance of being employed in the future.


It is a must that children nowadays should have further education, to enrich their knowledge and skills.. It is true, the more things people can do, the more chances they could have find a good job.


Some people might do several jobs to get more salaries, some might continue their further education to find better chance to get jobs. This is mainly because of the demand to survive of people.



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10:12 PM.


September 9, 2011
Writing Task 2.
and so, another day had passed.
and i managed to finish another essay..

News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?



During the 20th century, newspapers are widely used and treated as a rich form of mass communication, as well as today.

Today, news can be shared in a second due to the invention of Television, Radios, and Internet.

Nowadays, news are mostly about bunch of bad news, or exciting,thrilling stuffs like crimes,

love affairs of celebrities. From these examples, we can see that editors always report news which

attract people and make them buy newspapers or tune the channel as long as possible.


In my opinion, broadcast rating are the factors that influence editor's decision. As we can see, the moment there is a hot news such as" Megan Fox scandal", people would tune up the news, or buy newspapers.Editors do this in order to grab people's attention, and bring income to the TV station.


As more people read or watch these kind of news, the more they are keen to know only about exciting news.

People would soon forget, or even neglect some useful stories, such as Charity shows, scientits's new invention, or environment problems.


The media should't focus too much on reporting these kind of bad news, instead,.

they should report more on good news, to inspire audiences.


As far as i'm concerned, I believe that editors should produce more good news rather than bad news. News editors should be more responsible for our society..



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3:48 AM.


September 8, 2011

I just finished doing the essays on Writing TASK 2 again. decided to post every essay i compose ..


Should Wealthy nations be required to share their wealth and poorer nations by providing such things as food and education?

Or is it the responsibility of the governments of poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves?


Wealthy nations should share their wealth to poorer nations, however, the government of the poor nations must help themselves too by improving

the quality of their life. It doesn't mean that, by receiving help from the wealthy nations, the poorer nations would sit and do nothing.


In my opinion, wealthy nations could share their wealth by providing emergency help, such as foods,clothes,money,shelter, and medicines. This could save them from

starvation or diseases. The next thing to focus on, could be education, technologies, knowledge, and health care. Focusing on and technologies such as

agricultural could increase their food production. Moreover, by giving them education and knowledge, they can enrich and change the better quality of life.


By sharing their wealth to poorer nations, they could decrease the rate of criminals, robberies, assaults, or even illegal immigration entering their country.

Besides, there's nothing to lose,it's always a good thing to help one another. As the saying goes, the more you give, the more you'll get.


Although the poorer nations should be supported by other countries, however the government must still take responsibility

to help their people to improve their quality of life. The money that they receive should be used firstly on urgent problems such as

the basic of human needs, to stabilize their poverty conditions..





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9:00 AM.


September 6, 2011

I have just finished WRITING TASK 2 for preparation of IELTS, and decided to write my composition here.

In case i lost it 0.0



There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more

important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?



Music, the art of combining vocal and instrumental sounds,

to create a beautiful form of harmony, expression, and emotion.

Today in this world, you can find many types of music such as Pop, Jazz, Rock, and others.


What is the importance of Music?

Music can stimulate our mind, the harmony of music, the sound it creates, can be pleasing to the ears.

Concert music opens up a new whole world experience, and further enhances the mind, body, soul.

Music can affect one's mood.


it can make a person happy, excited, calm, or even feel relax. the harmony of music, can nurture one's soul.



Music are said to be an important factor of learning,

children at the age of 3, are advised to listen to music.

probably, parents can play CD's, or other instruments at home.


Music can help children learn things faster, most importantly,

it can keep them calm, relax, and glowing spirit all day along.


Although many music types are created these days, we mustn't forget our traditional music.

Traditional music, is a type of music that originates from our hometown, or country.

It symbolizes the national culture of a country, or even commemorate a history or personal events.

Traditional music might differ with music nowadays in terms of instruments being used,

traditional music may focus more on vocal, dancing, and drums.


People nowadays hardly listen to traditional music compared to international music.

Although traditional music sometimes may not be pleasing to the ears,

but we should learn to appreciate the thoughts and efforts of those people creating this fine traditional music.

As the saying goes, traditional music symbolizes our nation's culture and history.


in conclusion, both traditional and international music are important,

what's important is the value and the benefits of listening to music.


Therefore, we shouldn't just listen to international music, and not traditional music.


Remember, music stimulates the body and the soul of a person, nurtures their mind and opens up a new whole world of experience.



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10:09 PM.


September 1, 2011
On wednesday, i went together with my family+ manto to a trip, we planned to
go to barelang at the first place, but then, my dad suggested ocarina.
=.=.. uh, ocarina??


Good thing my mom suggested we go to Batam view. i've never been to batam view before,
and this is my first time. it was a long trip, and again, i sat at the car for like an hour.
we had trouble getting there, cos no one knows really where batam view is.

alas we arrived at our destination, and guess what. what a damn scorching hot day=.=
never felt so hot before. omaigoat, i sweat a lot. and pant* pant*huff.. i was expecting to
play at the beach, but no.. it was really hot, manto and i decided to seek refuge at the hotel lobby,

by the time we went to the beach, it was too late. my parents decided to went home already,
we decided to eat at the adjacent restaurant nearby.
we wanted to eat at batu besar rezeki, but it was closed for a day.
good thing there was another restaurant nearby, i was really hungry.

went to the beach twice consecutively, tired for the whole day.


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4:36 AM.



I've been staying away from home during these few days, for the past 2 days, i went to
the beach.

On Tuesday, i went to nongsa with my cousin's family. It was a long trip, but it was fun.
the water there is salty as ever, somehow, it reminded me of the time where i had a very unforgettable trip with grade 10.
feeling nostalgic all sudden..


Unfortunately, it started raining, and a downpour followed next.
Honestly speaking, it was freezing cold, manto and i stood at where the rain pours,
anyway, let's get sick together. haha.

good thing it rained probably only for 20 minutes, but still, suffering from cold for 20 mins is
a torture.
after the rain stopped, we changed back into our shirt, and went back to my cousin's house.

it was really tiring.


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4:21 AM.